TITLE: My Sister's Dating a Serial Killer
GENRE: YA Thriller
Original critique on MSFV
High school's a bummer for sixteen-year-old Cameo "Cammie" Carter who
must stop her eighteen-year-old sister from dating a serial killer. The only way is to get hard evidence on him, but if Cammie doesn't
hurry, the killer might just put her and her sister on his To Do Murder List.
Logline Revision Critiques #25
TITLE: Jennifer Strange
GENRE: YA Paranormal HorrorOriginal critique on MSFV
Fifteen-year-old
Ghost Hunter Marcus must protect his family from a soul-eating wraith
but his only hope is Jennifer Strange who doesn't believe she can touch
ghosts.
Logline Revision Critiques #24
TITLE: The Wanderers
GENRE: YA Fantasy
Clouds of dead souls are filling the skies of Erion. When a ruthless
scientist professes to have found a solution, Rhanee travels back in time to
find a way to free the dead before he succeeds and claims ultimate power as his
reward.
Logline Revision Critiques #23
TITLE: Artashad
GENRE: Historical
Logline Revision Critiques #22
TITLE: DEATHLESS
GENRE: YA Fantasy
Original critique on MSFV
When an army of ancient monsters threatens to overrun her country, 17-year-old fugitive, Zee, joins the army to win a reprieve from her death sentence, only to discover that she is the key to awakening the centuries-old goddesses the monsters are fighting to free.
GENRE: YA Fantasy
Original critique on MSFV
When an army of ancient monsters threatens to overrun her country, 17-year-old fugitive, Zee, joins the army to win a reprieve from her death sentence, only to discover that she is the key to awakening the centuries-old goddesses the monsters are fighting to free.
Logline Revision Critiques #21
TITLE: Amongst
GENRE: Middle Grade Fantasy
Original critique on MSFV
No one has ever left Verandale…at least not with their body still wrapped around their soul.
But thirteen year-old Enoch believes he has discovered a way to escape.
GENRE: Middle Grade Fantasy
Original critique on MSFV
No one has ever left Verandale…at least not with their body still wrapped around their soul.
But thirteen year-old Enoch believes he has discovered a way to escape.
Logline Revision Critiques #20
TITLE: Twenty-Four Hour Boy
GENRE: Contemporary Middle Grade
Original critique on MSFV
GENRE: Contemporary Middle Grade
Original critique on MSFV
Up all night, every night, ten-year old gadget-maker Hunter
Harris is happy with his freakish lifestyle. Unfortunately, when Hunter reports
a strange light and noises in the night and then a murder next door his parents
question his sanity and Hunter has to prove that he was telling the truth or
risk losing his secret life forever.
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